Feedback from class of our final finished video

Generic Conventions
no comments

Performance & Mise En Scene
The performances conrast each other and the two peformers (Sabil & Jack) bring a certain vibe to the performance as one is very still/immboile whereas the other is moving about a lot and the two combined fit well into the shots.

Lip Syncing
some words missing in lip sync

Narrative/Abstract
no comments

Editing, Camerawork, Special Effects
Black and white fit the song; good contrast between chorus and verse; good layout of shot on balcony bit